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ANNOUNCEMENT: CLOSING DOWN [Aug. 8th, 2008|05:07 am]

xianfanfic

[readerofasaph]
Due to an, uh, overwhelming lack of activity on this community for the last few years, I plan on deleting this community account soon. Thanks to everyone who has been a part of this!

Am planning to set up a community with a more generalised focus, on Christianity, literature, and creative writing, at [info]wordsofthecross; while fanfiction will only be a minor focus of this community, it will probably still form part of the discussion. Anyone who is interested in books, writing, and the Christian faith is greatly welcomed.
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Icons~ [Aug. 7th, 2008|11:47 am]

saiyuki_icons

[arysin]
There are 4 icons altogether. I've never really made icons before, so bear with me~


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Two for the Price of One [Aug. 7th, 2008|02:23 pm]

fanficrants

[chasingtides]
When you write a story and post it, you really ought to have a title. It's pretty important.

As a writer of fic and maker of fanmixes, I know that coming up with a title is often a difficult task. One wants to be catchy without being trite. Do you really want to use lyrics from that Evanescence song? Is using that one line from Tennyson too overdone? Do you want a really long title or a short title and a longer subtitle? Is that title too revealing?

However this:

Title: Blah blah blah* (not the really title... don't have a title yet)

Makes no sense. Really, even if you use another line from a Shakespearean sonnet, it's got to be better than this.

*Title changed to protect the guilty.

*

I love crossovers. I really do. They're not even a guilty pleasure; I freely admit it. I adore seeing how people from different fandoms would interact. How would Sirius Black deal with Captain Jack Sparrow (or Captain Jack Harkness for that matter)? It makes me all happy and excited when it's done well.

However, when you just grab two people from different fandoms and just have them, for no apparent reason and without any apparent explanation, screw each others' brains out or profess their true love... I just sit there and scratch my head. I am a firm believer that any two characters can fall in love, but some characters need a better better back story than others. And when you give no explanation *and* it's a crossover... No. Stop. You might love these characters loving each other, but I really, really need a reason.
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nnnnngh [Aug. 7th, 2008|06:36 pm]

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[firefly99]
The purpose of fanfiction is not to wave it around in people's faces to show off how much smarter you are than other people.

Frilly obscure words and interesting parallels are one thing. Making the fic so thick with them that it's utterly incomprehensible is another. A common word used interestingly is far more arty than an uncommon word used for the sake of it.

I'm not saying not to use words that your readers will have to look up, but the purpose of fic isn't to beat off with your thesaurus in order to show off how incredibly, irresistibly awesome you are.

Also, using enormous amounts of Russian words where it's neither for effect or because there's no English equivalent to the word is just extremely annoying for those of us who don't speak Russian. You wouldn't accept fangirl Japanese, so quit it.
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[Aug. 7th, 2008|06:12 pm]

fanficrants

[ansela_jonla]
[Current Music |For The Greater Good Of God - Iron Maiden]

Dear Bleach fandom Yes, I know, why haven't I learned my lesson yet?

I doubt that Ichigo or Renji would have hands that are completely smooth and blemish free. They are both swordsmen who are going to have callused hands. The same goes for any of the other Shinigami. Yes, even Yumichika is going to have callused hands, since he is a swordsman. Even Ishida is going to have calluses, since he has to pull back on a bowstring repeatedly. Why are so many characters given perfectly smooth hands in fanfic, as if they haven't lifted a sword in their lives?

This actually applies to any fandom where the characters wield swords, knives, bows, guns etc. Please, think about this before you write.
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Harry Potter fandom, why can't I just leave you for good? [Aug. 7th, 2008|12:44 pm]

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[midori_no_sora]
Okay, I know I'm asking for it when I go poking around the Harry Potter section on FFN, but this one really, really broke my brain.  

Really, the whole thing was just so OOC I nearly cried.  I couldn't even finish it.   

Also, on a completely different note, what's with everybody writing Sirius and Remus doing it on James's bed?  They have beds of their own, you know.  Yeah, it's funny every now and again, but it's in something like eight out of every ten fics for them. 
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spider-man/daredevil; In Which Nothing Gets Done; PG [Aug. 7th, 2008|12:29 pm]

marvel_slash

[krimtastic]
Title; In Which Nothing Gets Done
Fandom; Marvel (Spider-Man/Daredevil)
Characters/Pairings; Peter Parker/Matt Murdock
Theme; 28. author's choice (I'm not sure I want to know the answer)
Rating; PG, at best.
Canon; Just after In Which Matt Has Bad Timing
Warning(s); Um. Someone falls asleep? This one's very tame and very sweet.
Summary; Peter comes over a few days after the school incident to chat it up and ends up not chatting at all. From Matt's third person POV.
Notes; All this is turning into one storyline, so there's a little index here underneath the table if you'd rather read in order. :D
Crossposted to; [info]un_love_you, [info]marvel_slash, [info]spiderman_slash, [info]spideyslash and [info]give_spidey_lov


That hurt, by the way.
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[Aug. 7th, 2008|10:58 am]

kokiri85
It think it's from all the squatting I do when I'm stocking/fixing up the lower shelves, but my butt hurts really bad from work XP Which, I suppose is good because that means I'm getting exercise on the job. Also, here is some random art )
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On jailbait ninja [Aug. 7th, 2008|10:29 am]

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[lightning_ougi]
[Current Mood | pedopedopedo]

(Not a Kirigakure rant, though it is highly relevant to them, hur hur)

Look, so you're writing an older character shacking up with a much younger character. Let's say, she's 14/15 (you know, one of the original genin) and this guy is.... twenty something. So maybe the older character might feel a bit iffy.
But you say he shouldn't because 'She's over the legal age in Japan'

....
The Naruto universe is not Japan. Based off it, yes, but still not Japan.

Anyways, I really don't think they'd have 'Legal ages' in the various countries since the fillers point at a rather unorganized justice system and the manga points to little at all. But as a fanfic writer, you're obviously allowed a bit of your own world building, so you could establish a 'legal age' depending on the various societies.
Personally I always pictured Sand as highly prudish due to the political scene and the need to keep up a good image, buuuuut anyways,
But, when you really think about it, this adult character was no random Konoha nin, he was actually part of a dastardly group of mass murdering terrorists bent on destroying/ruling/whatever the hell they think they're doing to the world.

If you ask me, he really shouldn't be thinking 'Oh, this girl might be jail bait.' I think what would cross his mind is 'is this girl too young for me?'

You know. Less 'Chris Hansen, ohnoes!' and more 'This violates the remaining shreds of decency (I may or may not have as the author sees fit)'.

Legal in Japan, 
Lightning Ougi
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[Aug. 7th, 2008|10:20 am]

antishurtugal

[garretmurtagh]
[Current Mood | blah]

*sigh* After the unrelated Twilight business, I now happily bring all your attention to something about, you guessed it, Christopher Paolini, EveryOne's Favorite Worst Author Ever. (drumroll, please) He is- (another drumroll, please) Coming To A City Near You. Aren't You Lucky!?!

The Brisingr Tour kicks off September 19 at a Barnes & Noble in New York, as announced on Alagaesia,com. It's weird, though, there are like a dozen sites where he'll be doing the whole presentation and signing thing (hope he gets horrible hand cramps), and I'm no expert but aren't there usually more? And why wouldn't there be one in Chicago? And why, why, WHY, does he look like this:
In other words, Smug and Self-Important. And like he's daring me to punch him.

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wow... [Aug. 7th, 2008|11:24 am]

allecto
Talk about Customer Service!

While I was in the Adirondacks, my Wii broke. Stopped being able to read discs, either gamecube or wii. And, of course, it's well outside the warrantee. So I get home, I fill out a report online, I get sent instructions on how to send it to them, as well as a request for a check for $80 (so much cheaper than buying a new wii, and I get to keep all my saved data!). Sent it off. They got in in the mail Tuesday afternoon, and I just got an e-mail from Nintendo saying it's been fixed and is being sent back!

Will update if everything's copacetic when it comes. =)
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Yuletide Stories Of The Day [Aug. 7th, 2008|11:15 am]

yuletide

[astolat]
[Tags|]

Your Yuletide Stories Of The Day for Thursday, August 7, 2008 are:

Hostages of Mars
Fandom: Edgar Rice Burroughs - Mars series
Written by joandarck for Loligo
Dejah Thoris/Thuvia adventure, femslash, pre-series.

Smokers Outside the Hospital Doors
Fandom: Entourage (tv)
Written by Ellidyay for cashewdani
E starts smoking again because there's nothing else he can do. E/Vince, set somewhere after Season 4.

Try, Try Again
Fandom: Gordon Korman - I Want to Go Home!
Written by Terrie for bookchan
Rudy keeps winning.

New Kind of Monkey
Fandom: The Adventures of Barry Ween, Boy Genius
Written by swtalmnd for jheen
"I swear by Coach Marlin's third testicle, Jeremy, you only became bisexual to give your penis wider options."

Like David and Jonathan
Fandom: Bible - Hebrew Bible or Old Testament
Written by athousandwinds for ChibiRHM
"Like David and Jonathan". But what does that actually mean?

In Certain Towns
Fandom: Children of Dune (tv)
Written by bantha fodder for ilyena-sylph
He enters the House of Atreides as exiled Prince; as scholar; as Bene Gesserit.

The Choice to Die
Fandom: Tru Calling
Written by Shay for smurf
Tru ponders past choices and current relationships. Yuletide Treat.

A Midnight Clear
Fandom: As the World Turns
Written by Chelsea Frew for Troll Princess
It's New Year's Eve. Luke and Noah are ready to ring in the new year.

Stories from the most recent Yuletide challenge are posted in order of when they were uploaded. Please comment on the stories if you read and enjoy!



The following New Year Resolutions stories were also posted:

Desipere
Fandom: Catherine Jinks - Pagan series
Written by misura for Anita
A moment of stupidity. [Jordan/Pagan]



Your Random Unfilled Request Of The Day:

Recipient: rm
Request: Ellen Kushner - Swordspoint series (Basil St Cloud/Theron Campion)
Details: I know, I know, no one ever asks for them!



Your Random Older Story Of The Day:

Banky's Night Out
Fandom: Askewniverse
Written by resolute for Troll Princess in the Yuletide 2006 challenge.
After the events of Chasing Amy, Banky Edwards looks for new direction and finds Hooper.



Note: comments are not e-mailed; please comment on an admin post to reach the Yuletide mods!
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Department of Redundancy Dpt. with bonus ~*~*~*~*~*~ [Aug. 7th, 2008|10:43 am]

fanficrants

[nymosy]
So this fic is truckin' along nice and easy, and then we come to a scene change.

"Four days later:

"For four days..."

Four days? Yes? Four? Are you sure? Four days passed? Okay, four. Good. Four. All right.

Furthermore, you don't really need a line divider/horizontal rule/crazy bunch of characters every time you want to change the scene. Phrases just like "four days later" are actually really good at that, and they flow just a teensy bit better than 20 hyphens in a row or a line of ~*~*~*~*~*~ or 0o0o0o0o0o0 or -()-()-()-()- or whatever it is you kids are using these days. Hell, you could even use an extra line break or two to separate your paragraphs. I know it sounds crazy, but it actually makes you look older than twelve.
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Fic query [Aug. 7th, 2008|03:39 pm]

lupin_snape

[haces222]
[Current Location |hiding from the kids]
[Current Mood | curious]

Hello *waves

Okay I'm relatively new to this ship though not to Harry Potter in general and recently read a fic where the marauders Lily and Snape have to perform Little Red Riding Hood at Hogwarts. From what I remember Malfoy has to be director for the play and Granny (Snape) and Wolfie (Lupin) have some fun and because the play starts boring they conspire to stop Lily and liven it up.

Ps I was wondering if there was a website where you can specifically go for searching out snupin fics like the remus/siruis site  [info]accio_rs_fics
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[ ARASHI, Avatar, FE:PoR, MAOU, REBORN!, SE, Yamatarou, Yoiko no Mikata ] [Aug. 7th, 2008|09:19 am]

tomomichi
[Tags|, , , , , , , ]
[Current Mood | rushed]

SHARING TIME:
Awww, yay! Digimon week!
AND ONTO THE RECS:
    ARASHI - 4 Fanfics
    Avatar: The Last Airbender - 3 Fanfics
    Katekyou Hitman REBORN! - 1 Fanfic
    MAOU/Yoiko no Mikata - 1 Fanfic
    Yamada Tarou Monogatari - 1 Fanfic
    Fire Emblem: Path of Radiance - 3 Fanart
    Soul Eater - 2 Fanart


ARASHI, Avatar, FE:PoR, MAOU, REBORN!, SE, Yamatarou, Yoiko no Mikata )
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Reminder! [Aug. 7th, 2008|09:23 am]

lupin_snape

[snupin_santa]
[Tags|]



Sign-ups begin August 15! Feel free to pimp!

Rules and sign-up template are here. Don't forget: if you want to participate, but you won't be here between August 15-22, please fill out the template and email it to me at snupin_santa @ yahoo.com asap. Do this ONLY if you are going to be unavailable between August 15-22.
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dvd_commentary [Aug. 7th, 2008|07:29 am]

amanuensis1
[Tags|]
[Current Mood | awake]
[Current Music |elisabeth 2001 cast]

[info]dvd_commentary? Hell, yeah.

As if I needed to give permission. Okay, maybe I'm a little embarrassed about giving encouragement. It seems like another way of saying, "Please to be giving me more feedback," but, hey, it's a sanctioned way of going about it. So, sure, anyone want to do commentary on any of my fics, I'd love it.
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Fic: Five Times Ryan Was Tempted To Kiss Chad (And The One Time He Did). [Aug. 7th, 2008|09:15 am]

slytherin_gypsy
[Tags|, , , , ]
[Current Location |My Bedroom]
[Current Mood | accomplished]
[Current Music |"Spring Awakening" Soundtrack]

Title: Five Times Ryan Was Tempted To Kiss Chad (And The One Time He Did).
Author: [info]slytherin_gypsy .
Fandom: High School Musical.
Pairing(s): Chad/Ryan (mentions of Troy/Gabriela, Sharpay/Zeke, Kelsi/Jason).
Summary: During five different occasions Ryan has been tempted to kiss Chad. On the sixth time, he gives in.
Rating: PG.
Warning(s): None.
Word Count: 4161 words.
Disclaimer: All High School Musical characters herein are the property of Disney. No copyright infringement is intended.
Author's Notes:  Originally written for [info]swingathon  and posted here.

This was written for [info]allyndra, who asked for “a story where the race and class differences between Chad and Ryan actually matter” and who’d like to see “one of the boys suddenly realizes they've been in love/dating for ages”. I hope this manages to capture a bit of what you wanted.

The places and events mentioned in this story actually exist. As I’ve never been to Albuquerque, their representation is completely fictionalized.

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My latest batch of Saiyuki user pics [Aug. 7th, 2008|08:15 am]

saiyuki_icons

[feait]
[Current Mood |accomplished]
[Current Music |It's The Only One You've Got by 3 Doors Down]

I've been at it again.

Here's a preview:



Click here to see the rest of them.

Remember, if you have any requests for a user pic, please reply and post a link to the image. the request can be for any image, not just Saiyuki.
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Cassandra Clair [Aug. 7th, 2008|12:46 pm]

harry_submits

[applesgreen2]
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